Perhaps the best picture I ever took, I NEVER took.

20 some years ago my husband, George and I were visiting the Tuscan hill town of Montepulciano. Montepulciano is known for its wine and as a centre for the purchase of wine, olive oil and cheese. We had advanced as far as we dared down an ever-narrowing side street when we happened upon the Meuble Il Riccio hotel.  Our host was the wife of now deceased A. Caroti, who had conducted a School of Mosaic Art in this same space. He was more than a teacher; he had been Mosaic Artist to the Vatican.

For two days, we explored Montepulciano and towards the end of our last day, we went to make our purchase of wine from a vendor in the main square across from the church. George went in to see about the wine and  I took a seat on a well-worn ledge where I had photographed the communing of women earlier in the day… I was shooting film with a NIKON camera and by this time I had either used up all the film or I had one or two frames left. I sat happily tired in the late afternoon sun and waited for George. I pointed my lens, framing the people sipping espresso, meeting and greeting, walking briskly by…when a older man, dressed very well in shirt and waistcoat came and motioned for me to bring my camera and follow him… I pointed to the wine store and he pointed to his watch… gesture translated as: won't take long. In a moment of abandon, I followed him toward and then through a doorway right beside the wine store, up a series of staircases, and into an apartment. I started to feel some apprehension at this invitation to DO WHAT EXACTLY?

I followed as the [hopefully well-intentioned] gentleman led the way through the kitchen and dining area into the dimly lit bedroom. At first I failed to see what had been presented to me: then he opened the shutters and gestured for me to see. I gazed down and out from these windows high on the outside wall of Montepulciano looking down, past a snaking roadway into the Val di Chianaa with distant towns and tangled trees - breathtaking. He motioned for me to take a picture and I realized that the film was not advancing, my last role of film was spent, finished. I did what any tourist who has been given such a gift would do -- I pretended to take pictures. Then the man tapped me on the shoulder and pointed up to the ceiling, where a fantastic, albeit much-faded fresco adorned an otherwise stark room. Once more I raised my camera and pretended to click away. I motioned for the man to stand by the window for me to take his picture which he happily obliged…more pictures and more smiles. I said grazie, grazie, grazie, and I passed once more through the dining room, the kitchen, front hall and down the many stairs into the afternoon light.

I wore an expression of one who had an opportunity and took it - but did not, in fact, take it… if you see what I  mean.

What three elements of this story do you remember?

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Nora
ncamps@duo.ca
416 255 0775

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i'm the old man

Here at the Distillery District in Toronto where I live and work, I constantly want to share something I know or some amazing insight.. like how to get a free saki tasting or free beers at Mill St etc but I don't for fear the strangers will think im some deranged local.

returning with digital camera...

I had forgotten all about this story until i visited my parents last week and we were sharing stories of irony, of coincidence, of historical relevance to who we are... i think my memory of the story is far more colourful than the photos could ever be and now i have recorded the story and imagery for all time.

Nora

Great story :)

Did you ever go back and try to capture that view again?

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